PPT Topsites




This page has some examples of applications that we accepted for our pets. These are meant to be inspiration or guides for writing your own application. If you copy these or just change certain details within them we will know and add your name to the Hall of Shame. Check out the Application Tips page for more ideas.

 

- Allison recieved this application from sailor_scout_fan18 who was applying for Dazzle.

"Oh my gosh Dazzle!" Everyone knew my name was Dazzle249281 but just to save trouble and time they called me Dazzle for short. "What?" I asked confused, my best friend who is coincidentally my current owner goodkitty65477 has confused me yet again. "Do you know how many people are wanting to have you as their pet?" "No..." *How should i know? I was at the mall with Izzypoo22* "A good 100people!" "I knew i was gorgeous but that is ridiculuous" "Its the truth, i'm going to miss you Dazzle" Kitty wraps her arms around my face and pats my nose. "You'll visit me when your gone right?" "Of course! How could i forget about my best friend?" I say while jumping from place to place in a playful mood. Kitty smiles but i know she is sad. "Come on Kitty lets go for a ride" It seemed to brighten up her spirits. I bent my legs down to the floor and allowed her to climb on with ease. Once she was on i ran as fast as the wind. Galloping among the hills and forests. The wind blew through my chocolate brown hair and the sun made my sea coloured eyes sparkle. goodkitty65477 Held onto my mane as i ran it didn't hurt unless i stood on to legs, because then she pulled to stay on. *Do you know how much that recks my hair?* Not long after we found ourselves at Neopia Central. "Dazzle look theres the rainbow pool stop and take a drink" She jumped off my back and spoke again "i'm going to go into the food shop for a moment okay?" "Alright Kitty" I answer watching her walk into the burger shaped store. I drank the cool water from the rainbow pool and saw my friend Amber_Magic. "Hey Dazzle, whats up?" I remove my mouth from the water and trot over to her and reply "Oh nothing much just going out on a run with goodkitty65477, you?" "shopping for a birthday present" "Oh really? Whos birthday?" "Neko_Kamarii is nearly 1!" "Aw....how sweet" "Yes indeed" "Dazzle come on i've got you a treat" I turned my head and saw Kitty. "Coming! Would you like to join me for a quick snack?" "No thankyou...i've got places to be, good day to you Dazzle" I bid her farewell then slowly trotted over to goodkitty65477. "Who was that?" "Amber..." "Oh alright, here you go Dazzle a nice Chocolate bar" "thanks" She chucked it in the air and i jumped catching it in my mouth. "Yum..." I said my mouth full of chocolate. I smiled showing my teeth and Kitty cracked up laughing. "What is it?" She pulled out her star compact mirror and showed me that when i smiled my teeth were completely brown and looked as if they hadn't been washed for centuries. After the snack we rode back home to DancesWithSponge, DancesWithSponge and rolypoo. They were waiting at the footstep of the house. "What are you all doing out here?" "We were waiting for the key to come home" said Rolypoo who was lying upsidedown on the grass looking as if she was dead. "I'm sorry...i brought food home for dinner" "YAY FOOD!" Shouted Sponge. He loved food so much and it showed. "Alright...for Sponge and Frosty i have hotdogs with snow on top, for Izzy and Velma kau sorflet for the both of you, rolypoo and snowey i have for you snow pizza and last but certainly not least Dazzle i have for you uni day jam sandwhich" "THANKYOU KITTY!" Everyone shouted in union. "Your welcome" I smiled at the happiness on Kitty's face for she truelly was an amazing and kind person.
This was a story my mummy wrote for goodkitty65477, she hopes you enjoyed it

 

-Jenn recieved this application from twilighthunteress who was applying for rasbery_love, the Pink Lenny. This is an EXCELLENT example of a pet page application. Here is the link for her main application, and she wrote a small semi-roleplay in a neomail as an intro, as seen below:

'Excuse me, but how do you pronounce your name? Your writing is a bit-'"Messy? I know." The little minotaur girl squeaked, leaned over the counter and stared down at her application. She blushed in embarrassment as the woman saw her doodles that were scrawled around the border of the page. "Hock." The woman gave a nod, and filed the application away into a pile of other applications. Hock leaned backward and blinked. "Are all those applications for Love?" 'Yes they are.' Hock gulped, her bull legs buckling. "Wow. Everyone must love her." She loved over her shoulder at the pink lenny. The lenny was staring into a mirror, and the woman replied with a nod of her head. 'Now, you must get going. We have to-' "I understand." Slowly, Hock edged off toward the door, and looked over her shoulder at Love one more time. Then, she opened the door, and was gone.

- Eileen created this application to apply for Xt_Swift, the Baby Peophin.

Click here forEileen's Application for Swift

 

- This one is a random example of an application we would possibly accept. This one has the basic things we're looking for in an application, but doesn't really stand out very well from all of the others.

Hi Allison! This is goodkitty65477 contacting you about rolypoo. I have pondered carefully upon whether I can support another pet and have decided that I can. As I was pondering I looked at the ready to adopt page and saw rolypoo. I have always loved snow pets, I think the way TNT put carrots, coal, and other things that you would normally see on a snowman on the snow pets. I think that the bori is an exceptionally good looking snow pet. I love how they put those berries at the top of the tail. It adds some color to it. And rolypoo is a very nice pet in herself. In my mind her personality is one of mischievousness and kindness. I hope you let me adopt rolypoo, but even if I don't get her I give you my best regards.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Contact Us | About Us | Affiliate with DLAA | Suggestions

All Neopets Images are 2008 Neopets, Inc. All Rights Reserved. Used With Permission
This site is 2008 DL's Adoption Agency. View our disclaimer here.